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        Rain Upon The Sea.

Oh, this day, with music sweet
    of rain upon the sea.
That softest grey, in essence there
    with all its memories.

Standing at the edge of seas
    Waves beneath my feet,
Staring up, to find its home
    the rain caressed my cheek.

A flirting rain, I must have thought
    that comes and goes with ease
Best while it's there, I'll cherish it
     my rain upon the sea.

I remember well the taste
    as it trickled down my cheek,
And how I thought of finer things
    while others thought it bleak.

I watched each wave caressed and kissed
      not even unlike me
And how each wave in pure delight
     bound ashore in ecstasy.

But like those things that cannot last
  It's forgotten beneath the sun
Its only hint of being there
   are memories, deep in one.

How fresh I feel, yes new again
     when ever there should be
a chance I should be standing
     in the rain along the sea.
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:iconsarah-the-writer:
This is beautiful! I love the good feeling I get from reading it :-)
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~HeAndHisCow Dec 11, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I felt a jolt of inspiration after reading that. Thank you.
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~brunette-from-oz Dec 12, 2010   General Artist
:-)
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:iconrainyskyz:
Sorry, meant "upon". It's been "along" day, maybe that's why. :D Spoilt my own words though. Oh well. Liked your poem.
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~brunette-from-oz Dec 5, 2010   General Artist
Thank you Claudia. I love the rain on the seashore. When you taste it on your face it seems like tears because the salt gets in the rain.
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:iconrainyskyz:
I never noticed that before. Really interesting. I'll keep it in mind the next time I'm lucky enough to be at the ocean and when it rains. I enjoy the sunny beach, however my favorite is when it rains, especially because the beach is usually deserted -- very few seem to love cloudy, rainy, chilly beaches. :)
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~brunette-from-oz Dec 5, 2010   General Artist
I never see anyone on my beaches. This summer I am going to try and find people to photograph!
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:iconrainyskyz:
I understand your poem completely. Rain along the sea would be a large slice of heaven for me. As long as it is the sky that cries, and not mine own eyes.
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:iconcobrastarfan123:
i've always wanted to go to the beach when it was raining :heart:
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~brunette-from-oz Dec 4, 2010   General Artist
:hug:
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